Suggestions or recommendations about the survey topic
Accommodation is important for
international students during study abroad because this is where students spent
the most of time to stay in, other than the university. In addition
accommodation can affect student happiness and stress.
We believe that
the proportion of share accommodation of international student will increase
in the future because it’s the best way to save money for international
students. As a result showed most of students rated accommodation as very good because
they are satisfied with everything such as quality of accommodation, facilities
or security, except the price. They said the price would be cheaper if they can
deal with the owner, without any agency. Moreover it will be great if the
University or non-profit organization can help international students to find accommodation,
which don’t need to prepare many documents, for example statement or salary
certificate for sign a house also don’t have to offer the price to competitive with
employees or local people.
There is a good suggestion here about what can be done to improve the situation of your project topic but I think this could be further developed in more detail. Also try to give another recommendation based on the responses you got from one of your survey questions perhaps about student satisfaction of accommodation and how it could be improved. You may need to check your use of modal verbs. Also check the structure of the last sentence of this paragraph as the meaning is unclear
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing the valuable information, it is very useful for the students because finding a student accommodation is itself a task but by getting right assistance it can be resolved, specially student preferences are like near the university as per their budget including all bills.
ReplyDeleteGood luck for all your endeavors!
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